For my final revisions, I made the title of my magazine a little less brighter red. Some of my peers and I both thought it was slightly too bright and hurt the eyes to look at. I then outlined it in white to make it easier to see the letters. I also revised the second page of my article. I spread the two pictures out more by moving the second one towards the top. Before, the pictures were closer together and I didn't use the space well. My teacher and I both thought that I should move them apart a little bit. I kept my table of contents the same, as well as my first page of the article.
